VERY GOOD. Much better and more intelligently written than most
black-on-white stories. With an opening up of the dom/sub, breeding
and related scenarios only briefly mentioned at the end, the author
could turn this into a notable series! 
  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

Another excellent story. I really enjoyed the progression from wife to
slut for black men. The only thing that would have made it better was
to have the wife black bred. This story needs a sequel to find out
where the wife progressed to in her black cock slutdom.   5 out of 5

What a fine book this one was, a strong submission of a W/Wife,
couldn't put it down. It was a little slow at the start but once it
gets started.   5 out of 5  (Flash)

A bit short but a inthralling story. Worth a read.  5 out of 5 
(Stark47 )

VERY GOOD. Much better and more intelligently written than most
black-on-white stories. With an opening up of the dom/sub, breeding
and related scenarios only briefly mentioned at the end, the author
could turn this into a notable series! 
  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

Another excellent story. I really enjoyed the progression from wife to
slut for black men. The only thing that would have made it better was
to have the wife black bred. This story needs a sequel to find out
where the wife progressed to in her black cock slutdom.   5 out of 5

What a fine book this one was, a strong submission of a W/Wife,
couldn't put it down. It was a little slow at the start but once it
gets started.   5 out of 5  (Flash)

A bit short but a inthralling story. Worth a read.  5 out of 5 
(Stark47 )

Fantastic story, short but powerfull  5 out of 5  (girly46)

Okay story, if you can get past the sloppy writing.  3 out of 5

Fantastic story, short but powerfull  5 out of 5  (girly46)

Okay story, if you can get past the sloppy writing.  3 out of 5

good book, it fekt short for me, i hoped it would be longer  4 out of
5  (xzinik)

This is the best book l have read in a long time. I did not want to
put it down. All the time l was reading it l was wishing it was myself
who was Aleshia.I spent all the time l was reading the book playing
with myself and had to stop regulary to give myself an orgasm. The
best l have doe in a long while   5 out of 5  (saffler)

a good sized book but  it was a long time to get going,at least for me
not bad but not really good  3 out of 5

good book, it fekt short for me, i hoped it would be longer  4 out of
5  (xzinik)

This is the best book l have read in a long time. I did not want to
put it down. All the time l was reading it l was wishing it was myself
who was Aleshia.I spent all the time l was reading the book playing
with myself and had to stop regulary to give myself an orgasm. The
best l have doe in a long while   5 out of 5  (saffler)

a good sized book but  it was a long time to get going,at least for me
not bad but not really good  3 out of 5

Graphic, great imagery, lots of sex.  Just what you expect from this
author!  5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

once started could not put down until the end  5 out of 5  (Rodger)

Graphic, great imagery, lots of sex.  Just what you expect from this
author!  5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

once started could not put down until the end  5 out of 5  (Rodger)

Although I am not much into "dollification", I haave to stay the story
developed very well. The book is well written. This is the second of
Dean's books I am rating as I think the author deserves it.  5 out of
5  (phoe)

Although I am not much into "dollification", I haave to stay the story
developed very well. The book is well written. This is the second of
Dean's books I am rating as I think the author deserves it.  5 out of
5  (phoe)

Great story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

Another good story, Erik.  I don't get into cuck elements much, so
some of the wife's "I'm going to do this whether you like it or not
behavior" isn't my favorite.  

What I've enjoyed most about your stories is that the husband and wife
are on the same page and it's not about humilation or ignoring the
husband's wishes.  

I'm looking forward to more.  And speaking of "more", are still you
working on the story you mentioned a little while back in one of your
replies?  You said it's about "I have one coming soon that will go
even further into extremes that I hope you will read and enjoy. It
will have "White Wives" in the title."  I haven't seen one with that
title yet.  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

Great story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

Another good story, Erik.  I don't get into cuck elements much, so
some of the wife's "I'm going to do this whether you like it or not
behavior" isn't my favorite.  

What I've enjoyed most about your stories is that the husband and wife
are on the same page and it's not about humilation or ignoring the
husband's wishes.  

I'm looking forward to more.  And speaking of "more", are still you
working on the story you mentioned a little while back in one of your
replies?  You said it's about "I have one coming soon that will go
even further into extremes that I hope you will read and enjoy. It
will have "White Wives" in the title."  I haven't seen one with that
title yet.  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

Another great story by a very good writer!!
  5 out of 5  (Sandman)

Excellent, erotic and just sexy fun. This goes in the top two books
Eric has written. The only thing keeping it from number one is not
confirming Cheryl's black breeding. If you like interracial and enjoy
Erik's stories, this one is top notch.  5 out of 5

The author obviously is in the "lifestyle" and writes in and erotic
believable fashion. As a couple we are also in the lifestyle and I
have witnessed my wife becoming a BBC connoisseur. This book along
with the others by this author are very erotic.

please keep writing:)   5 out of 5  (thanks)

Good story, well written. Few great surprises. Needs spell check to
not spoil the flow of the story. Worth a read.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Another great story by a very good writer!!
  5 out of 5  (Sandman)

Excellent, erotic and just sexy fun. This goes in the top two books
Eric has written. The only thing keeping it from number one is not
confirming Cheryl's black breeding. If you like interracial and enjoy
Erik's stories, this one is top notch.  5 out of 5

The author obviously is in the "lifestyle" and writes in and erotic
believable fashion. As a couple we are also in the lifestyle and I
have witnessed my wife becoming a BBC connoisseur. This book along
with the others by this author are very erotic.

please keep writing:)   5 out of 5  (thanks)

Good story, well written. Few great surprises. Needs spell check to
not spoil the flow of the story. Worth a read.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Nothing very exciting or even well written.  Story line is boring and
not well developed.  Nothing like the Jane series or Remaking of Mary 
2 out of 5

great story  5 out of 5  (edsubject)

Good story; maintained interest, enjoyed.  4 out of 5  (fred)

Very disappointing story.  Completely unbelievable, no erotic moments
or any kind of an interesting plot. Skipped through most of the text
that offered nothing, didn't add to the storyline, characters not
believable at all.   2 out of 5  (feb)

Another great read! Very colorfully painted sex scenes. No spoiler but
a good ending!   5 out of 5  (TOURIN51
)

Nothing very exciting or even well written.  Story line is boring and
not well developed.  Nothing like the Jane series or Remaking of Mary 
2 out of 5

great story  5 out of 5  (edsubject)

Good story; maintained interest, enjoyed.  4 out of 5  (fred)

Very disappointing story.  Completely unbelievable, no erotic moments
or any kind of an interesting plot. Skipped through most of the text
that offered nothing, didn't add to the storyline, characters not
believable at all.   2 out of 5  (feb)

Another great read! Very colorfully painted sex scenes. No spoiler but
a good ending!   5 out of 5  (TOURIN51
)

Fantastic story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

 abit OTT but makes a cracking read  5 out of 5  (brum)

Erik, There doesn't seem to be an easy way to correspond with the
authors here, but I would love to see Candace follow Nicole to CI.  5
out of 5  (authoritis)

An excellent story detailing the transformation from shy housewife to
BBC slut. Slow build up to hot erotic interracial sex.  5 out of 5

Slow build-up but good story. Am looking forward to Part 2.  4 out of
5  (qubert)

Fantastic story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

 abit OTT but makes a cracking read  5 out of 5  (brum)

Erik, There doesn't seem to be an easy way to correspond with the
authors here, but I would love to see Candace follow Nicole to CI.  5
out of 5  (authoritis)

An excellent story detailing the transformation from shy housewife to
BBC slut. Slow build up to hot erotic interracial sex.  5 out of 5

Slow build-up but good story. Am looking forward to Part 2.  4 out of
5  (qubert)

Erik, 
I didn't think you took either Candace, Ellen or originally Hannah,
far enough in your stories for them to truly be "black cock sluts". 
My neighbor/friend plays in a band.  It is not unusual for mixed race
couples to show up at the clubs he plays.  There is a distinct
difference, that's noticeable right away, when the woman is her black
man's slut.  Virtually all of the women that appear to be in a BCS
relationship are marked.  Many more visibly than Hannah. 

The last time I saw him play about 2 weeks ago, there were 3 IR
couples there.  Two of them were together and while it wasn't obvious
either of those women were BCS's (they both had 2 visible tatts), it
was obvious the third woman was.  She had a very low scooped neck
dress, with the back scooped to just below her waist.  Her breasts
were huge, obviously fake, DD's or larger, and it was obvious she had
nipple rings.  (BTW, if you do a 3rd story on Hannah, you might want
to add another nipple ring, and maybe other steel.)  She also had 4
visible 1" Chinese characters inked down her spine and tattoo on her
left shoulder.  What really got me was when she noticed a guy standing
about 10 feet down the bar from me staring open mouthed at her, she
licked her lips slowly and showed off a tongue piercing.  She looked
to be 40'ish and very well taken care of, with her "date" about 25-30.
 A BCS for sure.

A  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

Brilliant story, I hope that there is further progress for Hannah.  5
out of 5  (girly46)

An excellent sequel that drives the story along to new heights and
interracial fantasy. I hope there are more stories of Hannah to come. 
5 out of 5

Really brings Hannah up to speed.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Erik, 
I didn't think you took either Candace, Ellen or originally Hannah,
far enough in your stories for them to truly be "black cock sluts". 
My neighbor/friend plays in a band.  It is not unusual for mixed race
couples to show up at the clubs he plays.  There is a distinct
difference, that's noticeable right away, when the woman is her black
man's slut.  Virtually all of the women that appear to be in a BCS
relationship are marked.  Many more visibly than Hannah. 

The last time I saw him play about 2 weeks ago, there were 3 IR
couples there.  Two of them were together and while it wasn't obvious
either of those women were BCS's (they both had 2 visible tatts), it
was obvious the third woman was.  She had a very low scooped neck
dress, with the back scooped to just below her waist.  Her breasts
were huge, obviously fake, DD's or larger, and it was obvious she had
nipple rings.  (BTW, if you do a 3rd story on Hannah, you might want
to add another nipple ring, and maybe other steel.)  She also had 4
visible 1" Chinese characters inked down her spine and tattoo on her
left shoulder.  What really got me was when she noticed a guy standing
about 10 feet down the bar from me staring open mouthed at her, she
licked her lips slowly and showed off a tongue piercing.  She looked
to be 40'ish and very well taken care of, with her "date" about 25-30.
 A BCS for sure.

A  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

Brilliant story, I hope that there is further progress for Hannah.  5
out of 5  (girly46)

An excellent sequel that drives the story along to new heights and
interracial fantasy. I hope there are more stories of Hannah to come. 
5 out of 5

Really brings Hannah up to speed.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Hot! After I read it I passed it along to my wife with the idea of
getting her turned on too! Thanks Erik, for helping create one of the
hottest nights of my life. It has sparked a conversation which has
resulted in my wife and I seriously considering stepping into the
interracial lifestyle. Like I said, Hot!  5 out of 5  (LawrenceK)

Swinger with interracial porn. Quite well written.  Shame about the
happy ending.  Extra mark for this not being written in first person
as often this genre is.  4 out of 5

Erik, Awesome, and I'm ready for the next CI story, with the 3 ladies
at the "CI resort".  My slave has given many bj's and fucked,
vaginally and anally many men in her 5 years of submission to me.  By
many, I mean over 800 bj's and about 700 fucks (vaginal & anal) that
I'm aware of.  (She's such a randy little slut, it could well be
more.)  She'd had a previous Master, who got her started down the path
of submission, but her markings and oral skills have been a focus
during her time with me.  She has 2 tattoos, above her pussy and on
her lower back, and her nipples and tongue are pierced.  If we stay
together long enough, she'll have additional tattoos and vaginal
piercings.  I work with her, with her husband's permission and he
really enjoys the fruits of her labors, so I understand much of what
you feel, although my slave isn't exclusive to black cock.  I AM
curious about your character's oral skills.  I know with my slave, she
could deep throat 7-8 inch cocks when she submitted to me.  I worked
with a black bouncer at the strip club where she was waitressing and
arranged an oral gang bang with him and some of his friends.  From
that day on, she was under orders to swallow every cock she sucked, or
face punishment.  She failed one time afterwards, but since then, I've
seen her swallow some long and very thick cocks.  Men with cocks like
that have a real appreciation for women that can swallow them.  Feel
free to use that in a future story if you wish.  5 out of 5 
(authoritis)

This is a great story that has two different lines going at once. They
are quite opposite each other but both are interesting. The ending is
nice because it leads to more and I am waiting.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Hot! After I read it I passed it along to my wife with the idea of
getting her turned on too! Thanks Erik, for helping create one of the
hottest nights of my life. It has sparked a conversation which has
resulted in my wife and I seriously considering stepping into the
interracial lifestyle. Like I said, Hot!  5 out of 5  (LawrenceK)

Swinger with interracial porn. Quite well written.  Shame about the
happy ending.  Extra mark for this not being written in first person
as often this genre is.  4 out of 5

Erik, Awesome, and I'm ready for the next CI story, with the 3 ladies
at the "CI resort".  My slave has given many bj's and fucked,
vaginally and anally many men in her 5 years of submission to me.  By
many, I mean over 800 bj's and about 700 fucks (vaginal & anal) that
I'm aware of.  (She's such a randy little slut, it could well be
more.)  She'd had a previous Master, who got her started down the path
of submission, but her markings and oral skills have been a focus
during her time with me.  She has 2 tattoos, above her pussy and on
her lower back, and her nipples and tongue are pierced.  If we stay
together long enough, she'll have additional tattoos and vaginal
piercings.  I work with her, with her husband's permission and he
really enjoys the fruits of her labors, so I understand much of what
you feel, although my slave isn't exclusive to black cock.  I AM
curious about your character's oral skills.  I know with my slave, she
could deep throat 7-8 inch cocks when she submitted to me.  I worked
with a black bouncer at the strip club where she was waitressing and
arranged an oral gang bang with him and some of his friends.  From
that day on, she was under orders to swallow every cock she sucked, or
face punishment.  She failed one time afterwards, but since then, I've
seen her swallow some long and very thick cocks.  Men with cocks like
that have a real appreciation for women that can swallow them.  Feel
free to use that in a future story if you wish.  5 out of 5 
(authoritis)

This is a great story that has two different lines going at once. They
are quite opposite each other but both are interesting. The ending is
nice because it leads to more and I am waiting.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

For the last several year's the author has been producing a number of
hot, imaginative and intelligently written stories of
seducing/training white 'hot wives' for black cocks and their
ultimately supportive white husbands. I had thought that his recent
"Olivia's Conversion" with its welcome focus on the mental as well as
physical aspects of interracial submission had set the standard for
the genre. Now this latest book, as the title notes, goes "Beyond"
and, as sports reporters say, takes things to "the next level"....well
beyond the initial capture/use into a wide variety of subsequent
phases, increasingly hot sessions/situations and a realistic long-term
"solution" for both slut and (non-wimp) spouse. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED,
make it a 'doubleheader': read "Olivia's Conversion" first and then go
"Beyond"!!      5 out of 5  (eljay)

I think Mr Astor has out done himself on this book. A good read about
a lady that wanted something different and she got it with the support
of her husband. Great and some what unusal ending but I liked it  5
out of 5  (homebody)

Erik, terrific story as usual.  What's next on your agenda?  Do you
have something coming out soon?  5 out of 5  (nosympathy)

For the last several year's the author has been producing a number of
hot, imaginative and intelligently written stories of
seducing/training white 'hot wives' for black cocks and their
ultimately supportive white husbands. I had thought that his recent
"Olivia's Conversion" with its welcome focus on the mental as well as
physical aspects of interracial submission had set the standard for
the genre. Now this latest book, as the title notes, goes "Beyond"
and, as sports reporters say, takes things to "the next level"....well
beyond the initial capture/use into a wide variety of subsequent
phases, increasingly hot sessions/situations and a realistic long-term
"solution" for both slut and (non-wimp) spouse. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED,
make it a 'doubleheader': read "Olivia's Conversion" first and then go
"Beyond"!!      5 out of 5  (eljay)

I think Mr Astor has out done himself on this book. A good read about
a lady that wanted something different and she got it with the support
of her husband. Great and some what unusal ending but I liked it  5
out of 5  (homebody)

Erik, terrific story as usual.  What's next on your agenda?  Do you
have something coming out soon?  5 out of 5  (nosympathy)

Excellent!  5 out of 5  (MacK)

Good story with a few twists to keep it interesting. Well done.  4 out
of 5  (Fred)

Excellent!  5 out of 5  (MacK)

Good story with a few twists to keep it interesting. Well done.  4 out
of 5  (Fred)

I enjoy Mr. Astor's writing style and this continues my love of his
stories.  It's another awesome work!  5 out of 5  (Sandmanbob)

The examples are the hot part but half the story is is explanation and
planning which not all will find entertaining.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Not quite what I was expecting and not up to the usual standards of
this author  3 out of 5

Not as exciting as your other books, but I believe you met the intent
of the message you intended to deliver.  

When is your next story coming out?  I don't necessarily get off on
the whole black baby thing, but I do enjoy white women getting slutty
with black men.  You certainly have opportunities to write about
additional slutty activities by Erin from Substitute Husband, the
progress made by Olivia from Olivia's Conversion.  And did Tracy from
No Rules go further, how did Cheryl and Scott's "membership" turn out
from Cheryl's Passage to Black?  4 out of 5  (authoritis)

Quite enjoyed this. Good fantasy at times. Liked the interplay of
characters. Something different; well done.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Interesting. Worth a read.  4 out of 5  (Stark47 )

I enjoy Mr. Astor's writing style and this continues my love of his
stories.  It's another awesome work!  5 out of 5  (Sandmanbob)

The examples are the hot part but half the story is is explanation and
planning which not all will find entertaining.  5 out of 5  (qubert)

Not quite what I was expecting and not up to the usual standards of
this author  3 out of 5

Not as exciting as your other books, but I believe you met the intent
of the message you intended to deliver.  

When is your next story coming out?  I don't necessarily get off on
the whole black baby thing, but I do enjoy white women getting slutty
with black men.  You certainly have opportunities to write about
additional slutty activities by Erin from Substitute Husband, the
progress made by Olivia from Olivia's Conversion.  And did Tracy from
No Rules go further, how did Cheryl and Scott's "membership" turn out
from Cheryl's Passage to Black?  4 out of 5  (authoritis)

Quite enjoyed this. Good fantasy at times. Liked the interplay of
characters. Something different; well done.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Interesting. Worth a read.  4 out of 5  (Stark47 )

Loved it, it was like I was there--and this is frankly a place my wife
and I would love to visit if it only really existed.  5 out of 5

Erik, Another outstanding story.  I think you misunderstood some of my
other comments.  I was just remarking on what I've observed in the IR
scene locally, not necessarily something for you to follow.  I really
enjoy that your stories are NOT cuck stuff.  Are you giving any more
thought to continuing Candace's story?  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

A good story but a little short on the life and sexual aspect on the
island. I expected more interracial encounters and sex. I was more
interested in the other couple due to the interracial pregnancy.  4
out of 5

Wonderfully written  5 out of 5

Loved it, it was like I was there--and this is frankly a place my wife
and I would love to visit if it only really existed.  5 out of 5

Erik, Another outstanding story.  I think you misunderstood some of my
other comments.  I was just remarking on what I've observed in the IR
scene locally, not necessarily something for you to follow.  I really
enjoy that your stories are NOT cuck stuff.  Are you giving any more
thought to continuing Candace's story?  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

A good story but a little short on the life and sexual aspect on the
island. I expected more interracial encounters and sex. I was more
interested in the other couple due to the interracial pregnancy.  4
out of 5

Wonderfully written  5 out of 5